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LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

0 posted 1999-10-05 02:41 PM


Dear me, Poet Femme,
I thought you already knew,
The words you share with him,
Will only be a few.

You see, he's been ailing,
I think with appendicitis.
His memory is failing,
He's got laryngitis.

He's always gasping for breath,
His chest has been a wheezing.
He's isolated by bed rest.
Did I mention all his sneezing?

I'm sure you feel like singing,
As the talking time comes due.
But he may not hear you ringing,
An ear infection has run him through.

Do you hear the wedding bells?
They're tolling just in time.
He isn't in the best of health?
Relax. The operations went just fine.

© Copyright 1999 Michael Waterman - All Rights Reserved
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
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Louisiana
1 posted 1999-10-05 03:13 PM


How reassuring! LOL.

Toe, sweets... I did not, repeat DID NOT spread these flu germs through cyberspace! LOL

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
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Northwestern, NJ.
2 posted 1999-10-05 03:48 PM


Very endearing words here!! LOL!

Jenny

Toerag
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Ala bam a
3 posted 1999-10-05 03:53 PM


And now my two cents dear PoetFemme,
Now don't ya go worrying bout this certain him,
Let me offer ya reassurance,
He may have great insurance,
And though LongJohn may think he's ill,
He may have put ya in his will?

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
4 posted 1999-10-05 03:59 PM


Hey there, ya scalawag. Great follow up - a good one-two punch if I ever saw one. Ol' gal Femme will be reeling with the blows now - heh heh heh
Toerag
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Ala bam a
5 posted 1999-10-05 04:10 PM


Hi ya LJA...love ya man....missed ya..hope things are going well for ya...
LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
6 posted 1999-10-05 04:15 PM


Hi ya, Toe - I'm getting in deep with my next project and have done a week's worth of reading and review in the past two days. Time for a break.

There's a sweet response for your poem on the Adult board - enjoy - lol

hoot_owl_rn
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Glen Hope, PA USA
7 posted 1999-10-06 08:53 AM


Laughing
Michael
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California
8 posted 1999-10-06 01:20 PM


Long John,
I think you carried this way too far..I don't recall "sneezing" once! ROFL, thanks for such an ailing tribute.

------------------
Michael Anderson

When God puts a tear in your eye,
He puts a rainbow in your heart.




[This message has been edited by Michael (edited 10-06-1999).]

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