Open Poetry #3 |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
It seems like only yesterday, ...I took you as my wife, Yet it seems forever, ...you have been my life. Eight and twenty years ago, ...I took your hand in mine, Gazed into your deep brown eyes, ...and vowed I would be thine. Looking back in retrospect, ...were far too young to wed, High school sweethearts still in school, ...would never work they said, Starting out with cupboards bare, ...we built a life as one, We rose each morning hand in hand, ...and faced the rising sun. Four children born, four children grown, ...I love you even more, Than a day so long ago, ...I'll love you evermore. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Mike...this was wonderful. I would have to say, that's one lucky wife you have there. Nicely written and what a nice tribute to your better half ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, Enjoyed the read, well done. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
this piece brought a tear of joy to me eye....what a beautiful tribute to your wife.......so very lovely and touching Mike........... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Mike! I'm sure she loves it! ------------------ Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank you for the comments, appreciate it. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You have such power in your words. I have yet to read something of yours that didn't move me! This is a wonderful tribute to your marriage! You are both lucky to have each other! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done! (The poem and the marriage *S*) |
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