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She Came To Me
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She Came To Me |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
My heart of hearts she came to me Bearing the gift of ecstasy Answering my desirous dreams Of hope's eternal expectancy Await no more my lady said Lie within my body's embrace For on this night I'll be your bed This lover's heart will beat the pace Explore these curves of giving flesh Your searching lips bring to my own Make of these limbs a lover's mesh Linger for pleasures since unknown Set afire this very skin Consume this body that is new To claim my treasures deep within The gift it holds burns all for you I held her gift most tenderly Becoming bold where once was meek Daring to touch all so gently Her greatest pleasures I did seek No longer shy, no long coy Across her skin with tender kiss Within her eye's reflected joy Within her sighs resounding bliss All I could give I gave to her Our bodies in perfect union What was my dream now my lover True heart and soul's companion My heart of hearts she came to me Bearing the gift of ecstasy Answering my desirous dreams Now all my hopes reality [This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 10-04-1999).] |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
This brought back some memories ..  ..ooops, well you know what I mean..LOLHUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Words could not express how I feel about this poem. It really hit home. I loved it. ------------------ "I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel |
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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
this is really wonderful....i love the way it flows and the meaning touches me.... [This message has been edited by Rhiannon (edited 10-04-1999).] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
RainbowGirl: Hope they were pleasant memories and yes I know what you mean. Thanks for the Hugs. Lynn: You are most kind. Thank you Rhiannon: Again, my thanks for your comments. Glad I could write something that others find personal meaning in. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nice Sir. Andrew thanks for the read ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent, Andrew. Erotic with class and romantic with style. Nicely done. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
I love a poem you can feel...and you can really feel this one. Simply beautiful, Andrew. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Simply lovely! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A very sensual poem...whew! could feel the paint coming off the walls from the passion and romance here! [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (edited 10-05-1999).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Andrew...many nice things about this man! (One of the first things I noticed is that it didn't slam poor old Toe)...Good work old man.... |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
andrew, really nice, and hey is it cheating to ditto Balladeer? he said it perfectly |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Scot, Enjoyed the read, well done. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
My most sincere thanks to you all. Although writing this piece was a true pleasure in and of itself, that joy is flamed anew by your kind and generous responses… especially from so many who's works I have come to admire and opinions I have come to respect. I humbly bow to you all with gratitude. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
oh my......I LOVE THIS PIECE Andrew.....simply exquisite....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thumbs up, Andrew! (And since I have to let go of both my cough syrup AND my kleenex to give a double thumbs up, you know it's good! LOL) |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
So, Pepper... let me know how you really feel Honestly... thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed.And the Lady Suthern be illin'. Well... a super big thanks for takin' the time and energy to read and give me the two big thumbs up. Just as long as ya never give me two big Toes... one's more than enough! LOL! Muchas Gracias senora Suthern! Take care and get well. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Andrew...this truly was a great poem my friend, write some more serious stuff....I wish I could meet ya some time...maybe the pleasure will happen some day.... |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Mr Scott - I enjoyed this poem. It had class, and showed that romance exists within your heart. You must show us more. Naturally, you must not do this when the rest of us are posting, but wait instead for a respectful amount of time to elapse so we other men don't look too oafish in comparison. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
ahh Mr. Scott....As I said in my attempt to piece this place together. You carry yourself with elegance and style. Very well done Sir Scott. I did find that poem or rather call to posts piece you refered me to in your reply. Took some doing because it was on page 16...LOL. I posted on it but then this thing broke. Keep the words flowing. Marilyn. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Yo Toe: Thanks again... If you're ever in So California look me up. The radio station's doors are always open for ya. Sir LJA… what can I say to that? I am definitely a romantic at heart as my wife can attest too. But after reading some of your wonderful work as well, I say your comment is pretty high praise. Thank you so kindly. Marilyn: I noticed you success at finding that distant piece just before all went to hell. Thanks for taking the time and effort to dig it up. It sure was a lot of fun! Also thank you for kindness here… it is very much appreciated. [This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 10-06-1999).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Andrew....when LongJohn puts his mind to it, and has the time...some of his stuff is the best I've ever read....he just hasn't done so in a while. (Don't let him read this though, that prick doesn't need any more ego than he now gets from his sweet misled bride) |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I absolutely love this!!! |
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