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Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX

0 posted 1999-10-04 03:58 PM


a childs'
secrets
whispering
innocence
a little voice
"I love you
so much"
tiny soft arms
wrapped
around my neck
words spoken
in its own voice
a moment of eternity
within my breast.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




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Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap
1 posted 1999-10-04 05:10 PM


A tender and touching sentiment ...

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")



Denise
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2 posted 1999-10-04 08:54 PM


It's the best, isn't it, Julie?! And so is your poem!

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Denise

Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12
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Honea Path, SC USA
3 posted 1999-10-04 11:09 PM


Beautiful! "a moment of eternity" I love that!
Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
4 posted 1999-10-04 11:20 PM


Thank you Nocht, Denise, Tara!

As I wrote this I remembered those
wonderful hugs from my granddaughter.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-10-05 08:37 AM


Very touching Julie
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 1999-10-05 10:09 AM


Julie,
Touched me , well done.

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
7 posted 1999-10-05 10:09 AM


heartwarming....beautifully done....a wonderful read Julie

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
8 posted 1999-10-05 02:15 PM


Thank you Seymour, Pepper, and hoot.

It warms my heart that you enjoyed this so.

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Julie
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Thou who has given so much to me,
give one thing more: a grateful heart.
>George Herbert




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