Open Poetry #3 |
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Whenever You Are Ready |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston ![]() |
Teach me how to live without the touch of my lovers hand. Give me strength to accept things that I don’t understand. Show me how to keep the faith that falters day and night. Help me to keep my goals and dreams forever in my sight. Time will work against me this I’ve come to realize. Tears that well and overflow, reflect the pain within my eyes. Though I will try to keep my path forever straight and true. I can only hope that it will lead me right to you. I’ve always tried to live my life the best that I know how. But looking back I realize how wrong it was till now. I am but a sinner Lord, help me to overcome. Help me change my habits so that I won’t die as one. I will keep my faith in God forever true and steady. I am waiting here for you whenever you are ready. I’ll try not to question the decisions that you make. Each night before I go to sleep I’ll pray my soul you take. ------------------ Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, Lucie...this is fantastic. Very emotional and heartfelt message. Thanks. ------------------ Michael Anderson The coldest lies are often told in silence. |
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Lorelei Junior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 23Philadelphia, PA |
That was beautiful. Very touching... |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Amen, Lucie! Beautiful! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Lucie: Whether this be for you on someone else, let's hope it helps.. ![]() HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Powerful words Lucie. Well written. I also try to stay true to him and myself. Not always and easy task. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...I'm speachless (And we all know that doesn't happen often...LOL) ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
My faith resides far from any organized religion, but this was well said. I'm sure your words will not go unheeded. (Don't think however that you are saved from my future rath ![]() |
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Elizabeth![]() ![]()
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
My prayers are with you, Lucie dear... Love, ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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Deb Lynne Member
since 1999-08-19
Posts 180Where blue skies meet blue ocean |
This one touches me! Very beautiful. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Lucie! ![]() ------------------ Denise |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Thank you all for your wonderful replies. ![]() |
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