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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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Missing you- inadequate words they don't capture the wistful, wrenching peace of pain I live To know your movements to clasp your hands to laugh into eyes the colour of a brimming sea Oh I would be replete but I must miss instead mis-steps in time mis-spell words I'd rather speak miss beats of a heart miss hours when I could be with you the days in time that we're apart I hope then to mis-count those days so they become none mis-gauge the length of them so I may miss you no more my Mis-ter (Almost) Perfect KM  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Severn, Lucky guy, Nice read I enjoyed. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Words do seem inadequate at times, but you have certainly found them! ------------------ Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Seymour - thanks! But as I keep telling him I'M the lucky one. Dsnyder - the highest compliment to a poet, that they find adequate words - thanks!!!!! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Ok mis-sy, I hope you do mis-count the days, for I am in mis-ery without you by my side. I know well that the days 'til we met shall be mis-spent, and hope you don't mis-interpret, when I tell you that I love you. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You are so wonderful, make no mis-take, I can't possibly be mad at you for trying to beat me YET AGAIN!!!!!! No mis-interpretation, my M.A.P. and one  because blue is SO pretty - it's the colour of someones eyes that I long to look into... K |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Severn, I hope you know what you've gotten yourself into here! Mr. (almost) Perfect! His head is going to swell up after that one! LOL Your poem is sweetly sad, dear. And he is so obviously smitten! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
PDV - it's a private joke - we both know we are anything but perfect - hence the almost!!!! (Maybe his head will get big enough so that he can bounce on over here to the land of sheep!!!) Thanks de Vine! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Smiles...now you two quit arguing over who's the lucky one...as I see it, you're both getting a pretty good deal ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Well done, Severn! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
smiling here |
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