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Your Voice |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704
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I heard your voice today I caught your laugh and imagined your throat as it moved I tasted your talk and pretended you spoke bright words beside me a breeze kissed me and I knew it was you That cool wind in my hair? It was only your fingers I see the same shapes as you the shapes of clouds and souls you are my mirror I am your echo and silences? They say you are only sleeping you are near I heard your voice today and I hear it now quietly whispering in the air one day I will gently stroke your throat and kiss the laughs right out of you one day you will sleep in the silences of my love... 3.9.99 KM |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Severn, This is beautifully romantic! I especially like the part "and kiss the laughs right out of you" Sounds so romantic and so fun as well. ------------------ If you love me like music, I'll be your song. ~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Whoa...now Severn, you are definately echoing my thoughts with this one. We need to get together and talk sometime. Nicely done!! ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
And since I must win, I tell you that I AM THE LUCKY ONE! K- ever am I with you, always. Your words bring me that much closer and you know that I treasure each one, knowing that it was lovingly crafted by your hand. And know that someday soon will be here before we realize it! (PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!) Love Chris |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wildchild - it's going to be the most fun I've ever had!!!! Hoot - I agree, talk to you when I can - as explained below. Chris - I'm trying to e-mail you but as usual the networks are down!!!! I'll keep trying dear, grumble grumble, moan moan...... and you know these words can only be for you... |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So incredibly romantic....wonderful work! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Severn: I can imagine you both smiling..  HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Jeeze I wish Femme would get back so I wouldn't be just a voyeur to all this love floating around here...sweet poem, severn, *deep sigh*. ------------------ Michael Anderson The coldest lies are often told in silence. |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Even me...a poet of "Rhyme", can truly appreciate the beauty of this romantic piece. Very nice.  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Thankyou all so very much!!!! 'sMichael - don't worry, I'm sure it won't be for long!!!! Sally - that is quite a compliment!! |
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Seaangel Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 167Auckland, New Zealand |
Exactly what it feels like for everyone else, at least you know who and where that someone is!! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
WOW ... this one gave me chills, Severn ... beautiful sentiments, beautifully written ... just exquisite! Christopher, you are blessed ... Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Sigh....so beautiful Severn ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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