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Hunger of the Immortal
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Hunger of the Immortal |
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Elysium Moon New Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9 |
Sitting astride her Stygian mount wings curled at her side riding faster through the glen seeking vengeance for her pride fiery blood flowing in her veins the need is on her now seeking mortal blood to fulfill her virgin vow thrusting forward in the seat crazed with hunger’s desire no man is safe from vixen’s touch that ignites her wanton fire |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
"thrusting forward in the seat crazed with hunger’s desire no man is safe from vixen’s touch that ignites her wanton fire" Awesome imagery! ------------------ "We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion.....the powerful play goes on and you may contribute a verse. What will your verse be?" --John Keating, Dead Poets Society |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Wondrously done! The rhyme at the end adds a final punch to the piece. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
What else can I say, but that I really liked this! |
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Elysium Moon New Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9 |
I decided to put a beginning to the story. Please see Birth of the Immortal. Thank you all for you kind words - this is a departure for me. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ah remember this, too. An' ah still love i'. She said burn ... together. |
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