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Shar
New Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 6
Hesperia, Ca. USA

0 posted 1999-09-15 08:58 PM

In the morning
before first light
though I sleep
my soul takes flight
on a journey
to an unknown land
free from prejudice
of man
Rainbows smile
warm and true
Bless the hills
in morning dew
Lilac fragrance
fills the air
Birds serenade
with voices fair
In the stream
the sunlight plays
teasing shadows
with it's rays
Lilies dance
upon this land
Mother nature
leads the band
Serenity
with all her charm
wraps you in
her soothing arms
But alas
my soul shall weep
as my body
wakes from sleep
This precious world
so it seems
only exists
within my dreams

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tori
Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 520
Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA

1 posted 1999-10-01 02:59 PM

Shar this was "Absolutely Beautiful". be proud of this one :-) I'm glad I found it...

I'm thinking......
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If with pen in hand I've made you think
I've not wasted one drop of ink
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Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

2 posted 1999-10-02 03:33 AM

If only in the real world there was such a place *SIGH* Lovely poem!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-08 09:21 PM

Shar, how did I miss this one? (ooops, I forgot I was away that week!) I'm glad I found this! Very well done!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-10-09 12:21 PM

Nicely done...good imagery!!

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 1999-10-09 07:04 AM

I'm glad someone pulled this to the top! It's a lovely poem.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

6 posted 1999-10-09 07:08 AM

'Tis a good verse indeed.

Shar? As in the Night Goddess?

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 1999-10-09 08:58 AM

Shar,
Agree with all the above. Good verse, well written, well done.

zipknee
Junior Member

since 1999-07-28

Posts 35
Oak Park, IL

8 posted 1999-10-09 09:00 AM

what a beautifully descriptive poem. i really like it.

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

9 posted 1999-10-09 11:48 PM

Beautiful...if only there was such a place..

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

Tara Simms
Senior Member

since 1999-08-12

Posts 1244
Honea Path, SC USA

10 posted 1999-10-09 11:57 PM

If my dreams took me to a place such as you described, I may never wake. Sounds wonderful!

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It matters not how strait the gate;
How charged with punishments the scroll;
I am the master of my fate:
I am the captain of my soul.
--W.E. Henley
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Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

11 posted 1999-10-09 11:57 PM

wonderful visual...a beautiful poem Shar

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Kelly
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 145

12 posted 1999-10-10 02:03 PM

Great job. Let's take it back to the top.

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