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Jennifer Marie O'Neil
Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48
port charlotte fl/bklyn ny

0 posted 1999-11-08 10:17 PM



I ask if boredom
is crule energy
time yearning
for meaning
silence while
inner tongues
create tales
empty of devotion
visions of pleasure
absorbing wisdom
liberating lies
leaving nothing
but boredom

© Copyright 1999 Jennifer Marie O'Neil - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-11-08 10:26 PM


This is good, Jennifer! Well done.

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Denise


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-11-08 11:06 PM


Well done alright!! And a bit heavy for my mind at this time to give it the depth of thought needed..

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-11-09 01:30 PM


liked this much!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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