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Mike Pickering
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 18
Redlands, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-11-08 09:08 PM


I need help if this one.October 30 1999,
A day when it felt like you were mine,
I had nothing to fear,
When I held you near,

It felt like just you and me,
For the dance that seemed to last an eternity,
I put my hands on your hips,
Oh how bad I want to touch your lips,

But something prevented me,
From obtaining my destiny,
No ones to blame but myself,
I have to put my feelings on the shelf,

For another day,
When I could say,
The words I fear,
But hold so dear,

I would look into your eyes,
My stomach full of butterflies,
My heart would be racing,
From the thought of us embracing,

“Will you be mine?”
But what if you decline,
My heart would be broken,
It’s too late now the words have been spoken



© Copyright 1999 Mike Pickering - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-09 01:59 PM


liked this much!

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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
2 posted 1999-11-09 03:14 PM


And is your heart broken ? Well done : )
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