»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #3
»
Deep Waters
| Open Poetry #3 |
|
Deep Waters |
|
|
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
|
Deep Waters I am fearful of deep water where the undersurface is a confidential and unobserved place. I often glance back to the shallows near the water's edge same as an infant yearning for it's mother's embrace. However the seducement of deep water pulls at my soul and weans me from security. Robert ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
||
| © Copyright 1999 RobertB - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
People who think like this normally wind up in over their heads! Unfortunately, I know that pull all too well. Good job, Robert. |
||
|
Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Another great one Robert. I'm still 'hooked'. LOL ! |
||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Robert this is so Deep!  Another nice piece, Robert! ------------------ Denise |
||
Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Standing at the water's edge, I slowly let go of your hand ... confident, that you'll tred. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Marge...aren't you afraid I will drown!!??? Munda ...I am hooked as well. Denise...deep is do deep!! Balladeer... I am usualy in over my head! ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
||
|
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RobertB, Being in over your head isn't bad if you have learned to swim. |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nope ... got complete confidence in you ! Mom's are like that .... yeah, they are. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
||
|
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
hehehe Marge..this form needs a mom..we got a teacher.....and what else do we have here??? ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
||
|
Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
ooooh, I have been in deep water. Can't swim, but learned to dog paddle just enough to get my head out of the water! Lovely poem.  |
||
|
RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I am deathly afraid of deep water...it is almost a phobia with me. RB |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a thought-provoking piece |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
