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Trynete
Junior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 35
Cape Cod, MA

0 posted 1999-09-05 10:53 PM


White Lace
Listen to the golden bells sing,
for each ring,
an angel receives a pair of wings.
Hear the beautiful children's laughter,
silence soon follows there after.
A beautiful voice,
sent from above,
a gift to share with those who we love.
Feel the breeze,
let your mind at ease.
It's Sunday,
forget all of your worries,
relax and just let go.
Through the trees the wind will blow,
and silently the river flows.
Hear the choir rejoice,
in the glory of the Lord.
Open your hearts,
now lift up your voice.
Hear the organ harmonize
as the gentleman and ladies
voices beautiful become combined.
See the beautiful lace,
flow behind her with such beautiful grace.
Now united as one,
their silhouette fades away into the sun.


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Trinity

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The Forgotten Lady
New Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 6
Columbia, MO, USA
1 posted 1999-09-06 08:41 PM


Very nice chica, Encore!

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I once was a dream lady, but now I'm forgotten

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
2 posted 1999-10-28 06:32 PM


This was beautiful.
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-28 08:25 PM


Good imagery.Liked this much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
4 posted 1999-10-28 08:54 PM


Nice to see some happy poetry coming from you, my friend - I was ready to bring you over a care package of sunshine....

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-10-28 10:03 PM


Beautiful....the imagery was great
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

6 posted 1999-10-28 10:06 PM


This is beautiful! Well done!

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Denise


Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
7 posted 1999-10-30 09:10 AM


Well new one, lovely poem, and here is some sunshine from me...{~,^}
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