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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
One voice answers my need for compassion. One touch soothes away my indecision. One kiss is life to a soul so ashen. One love pulls the blinders from my vision. One touch soothes away my indecision. One woman saw through to my inner worth. One love pulls the blinders from my vision. One romance has led to my faith's rebirth. One woman saw through to my inner worth. One embrace from her is worth all my pain. One romance has led to my faith's rebirth. One lesson teaches hope is not in vain. One embrace from her is worth all my pain. One verse from me shows no little honor. One lesson teaches hope is not in vain. One noble life does her no dishonor. One verse from me shows no little honor. One passion becomes the height of pleasure. One noble life does her no dishonor. One sight of her is the greatest treasure. One passion becomes the height of pleasure. One kiss is life to a soul so ashen. One sight of her is the greatest treasure. One voice answers my need for compassion. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 11-08-1999).] |
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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
One beautiful poem ! ------------------ Faith is to believe what we do not see, and the reward of faith is to see what we believe. AUGUSTINE |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Awesome, brother. I see your heart vividly! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful,Brother of my heart! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
One fine job here DE....you're one fine poet.....ya know it?....I rarely reply to your stuff for some stupid reason...cuz most of it's damn good?....But I really liked the thought behind this one!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If it's the right one, one is enough... great tribute, DE! |
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DreadedOne Member
since 1999-10-25
Posts 51Odessa, TX |
Great pantoum, I really liked this. ------------------ D.O. Fear is overcomable, life is fleeting. Dreams are reachible, love completing. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
liked this one a lot too, really well done  |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Lovely ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This is indeed a great pantoum ! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
One more kudo? Yes, afraid so! Good job. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Nice job, Dream...your emotion is shining again...kudos, indeed. Michael |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ohhhh, 'Johnny One Note' ... you're singing my song. Very nice. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Lovely, DreamEvil. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DE, Enjoyed the read. |
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