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you could be |
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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
You could be anywhere tonight anywhere but in my sight You could be laughing sweet and clear, but into someone elses ear You could be riding on the train looking out at New York rain You could be holding soeone's hand and on your heart they dont demand You could be sipping dry red wine and without me you are just fine You could be laying with another but in your heart I hope I hover Or maybe your somewhere lonley too wondering if I am thinking of you |
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Patrick B Member
since 1999-10-28
Posts 58uk |
feels familiar,I like it :-) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
There you are Jennifer - Yep - You have a good feel for meter - I'll be reading your posts - Show me more of yer stuff....   |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Me too Jenny...(show me some more of your "stuff"...LOL)...this had some good thought behind it too...welcome and keep your mind working.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Welcome, Jennifer... I enjoyed this! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I can relate. Well done,and Welcome to Passions!! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Thoughts I've pondered often.Well done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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