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Two Formed As One (Revised..with thanks to Ruth. )
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Two Formed As One (Revised..with thanks to Ruth. ) |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio 
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I know my love for you, at last Within my heart forever true. In dreams you’ve always come to me, Like calming winds of mem’ries past. Love softly finds it’s way to you To capture what is meant to be. Remain in truth of what will be, Embrace this strength and make it last. As life engulfs its time with you, Surrender to this love so true. Unspoken passion from the past, Reveal your feelings now of me. Evoke these dreams you’ve brought to me. Yesterday? It can not be! Over throw thoughts of the past, Undying love is ours at last! For hearts tell tales of wishes true, Oh love, my soul belongs with you. Reach for those stars I’d give to you, Ask naught of what you give to me. Loosened heartstrings, yes it’s true. Look to the future, what will be. Envisage time, for it will last, Tormented lovers now in past. Erelong, there will not be this past. Regard now what I say to you… Negate false thoughts that this won’t last. Intrigue the night, come follow me To a place where we will be Yielding never more, love true. Melodic forces forming true, You cast aside fears of the past, Of silent question, “What will be?” Now strong, I stand here right with you, Enraptured by your stance with me. Love formed two souls as one at last. Ordained it’s true, both me and you… Victors of our past. Now with me, Each day will be, one more to last. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Beautiful acrostic! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Without the acrostic, it is an excellent poem. With it, it is exceptional. Beautiful work, Sally. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful...liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So very beautiful Sally......excellent writing!...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Thank you all..so much. I do like it better now that it was "cleaned up" a bit.  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sally, this is beautiful and well written, and you did all the work ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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