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To make a dream
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To make a dream |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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To make a dream For you to make a phantom dream, Add within its sum, some scheme. Then put a pinch of true and seem And savor it, your sleep to steam. Take it out within the hour, Garnish it, with plenty of flower. Serve it in your ivory tower. There release its awesome power. Now your dream can be good or bad, Depending on your seasons add. You may have summoned Galahad, Or the magic lamp of Sinbad. To make the recipe succeed, You must think carefully, indeed. Its true you add to suit your need, Just do not add that pinch of greed. For if you do it may explode and Hit the fan like pie a la mode. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Hehehe this was great!  X |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ditto! This is great, Seymour! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
X Angel and Denise, Well I got two greats with one explode. Not bad and thanks for the read. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Excellent...loved this! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I enjoy everything you write Seymour. The poet is you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Watcher, Thank you for the kind words, I can hardly keep up with all the postings lately. Martie, Thank you for the wonderful comments, you are no slouch yourself, love your stuff. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
A dream is a 'pie a'la mode' your heart makes? Yummy ! ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm laughing... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Don,t like loose ends want to thank you before I move on to forum four. Sunshine, Anything that makes you laugh makes me happy. |
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