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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 1999-11-07 07:38 PM


To make a dream

For you to make a phantom dream,
Add within its sum, some scheme.
Then put a pinch of true and seem
And savor it, your sleep to steam.

Take it out within the hour,
Garnish it, with plenty of flower.
Serve it in your ivory tower.
There release its awesome power.

Now your dream can be good or bad,
Depending on your seasons add.
You may have summoned Galahad,
Or the magic lamp of Sinbad.

To make the recipe succeed,
You must think carefully, indeed.
Its true you add to suit your need,
Just do not add that pinch of greed.

For if you do it may explode and
Hit the fan like pie a la mode.


© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
X Angel
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1 posted 1999-11-07 08:23 PM


Hehehe this was great!
X

Denise
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2 posted 1999-11-07 08:27 PM


Ditto! This is great, Seymour!

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Denise


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 1999-11-07 11:16 PM


X Angel and Denise,
Well I got two greats with one explode. Not bad and thanks for the read.

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4 posted 1999-11-08 11:29 AM


Excellent...loved this!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Martie
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5 posted 1999-11-08 03:01 PM


I enjoy everything you write Seymour. The poet is you.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 1999-11-08 09:59 PM


Watcher,
Thank you for the kind words, I can hardly keep up with all the postings lately.
Martie,
Thank you for the wonderful comments, you are no slouch yourself, love your stuff.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 1999-11-08 10:07 PM


A dream is a 'pie a'la mode'
your heart makes? Yummy !

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Sunshine
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8 posted 1999-11-08 10:22 PM


I'm laughing...
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 1999-11-09 09:31 AM


Marge,
Don,t like loose ends want to thank you before I move on to forum four.
Sunshine,
Anything that makes you laugh makes me happy.

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