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Just For One Night
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Just For One Night |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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LAST NIGHT YOU WERE MINE, YOUR NEVER FADING SMILE, YOUR JUST KISSED LIPS, YOUR PERFECT FINGERTIPS. JUST FOR ONE NIGHT. LAST NIGHT I WAS YOURS, MY HEART POUNDING, MY EYES MEMORIZING, MY PULSE QUICKENING, JUST FOR ONE NIGHT. LAST NIGHT WE WE'RE ONE, WE SOARED LIKE THE STARS, WE BATHED IN HAPPINESS, WE DRANK OF EACH OTHER'S SOUL, JUST FOR ONE NIGHT. TONIGHT SHE'LL HAVE YOUR HEART, SHE'LL BE YOUR MIRRORED LOVE, SHE'LL WHISPER SWEETLY IN YOUR EAR, THE DREAMS YOU ARE TO SHARE. FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE. TONIGHT I'LL PONDER RECKLESSLY, CHIDE MYSELF FOR BEING NAIVE, FOR WANTING TO BELIEVE- HATING YOUR ABILITY TO LEAVE, BUT I KNEW YOU WEREN'T FOR KEEPS, BUT JUST FOR ONE NIGHT. TONIGHT I'LL TRY NOT TO HATE HER, FOR HAVING YOUR TRUE LOVE, FOR BEING WHAT YOU'VE DREAMED OF, FOR KEEPING YOUR ATTENTION, FOR LONGER THAN JUST ONE NIGHT. TONIGHT I'LL REMEMBER THE ONE BEFORE, REMEMBER WHY I WAS THERE FOR YOU, REMEMBER THAT PAINFULLY I KNEW, IT COULD NEVER BE ME AND YOU, YOU HAVE MY HEART AND MY PRIDE, ALL BECAUSE OF JUST ONE NIGHT. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is heartbreaking and so very well expressed. I enjoyed reading this. ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed the read.  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So sad and heartbreaking. You know in my entire life I never had the courage for a one nighter!! Perhaps I missed out on something?------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
thank you both, to me it was more of an interlude of what is yet to come. i'm hoping to have him yet. |
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Lilli Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 21Melbourne, Australia |
Its possible that one nighters are for the best...Otherwise they get sick of you, and go running after someone else.. But it was a lovely poem, and well done. |
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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
I HOPE YOU GET HIM ! and you never know what a one nighter can turn into |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
believe me girls i'm still trying!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I think you and I should have a one nighter, just so you can be sure!!! LOL....nice read, nice poem gal... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
im glad i finally caught your attention toerag..smooch smooch..lol |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
liked this a lot, sigh... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
this is definantly not my best piece of work, but thank you all so much for your comments! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn, if you didn't just pull these words out of me...gawd don't I know this pain! |
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