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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Windows ... ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 You watched me leave through the panes of the window. I looked back through a window of pain. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Short and to the point. Well done. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Few words much feeling! I like your work! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Marge. Short and full of meaning! ------------------ Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks, Seymour, WhiteDove and Denise. Pain should be that short, but we all know it isn't. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
very nice play on words I enjoyed this short little piece hugely!  X ------------------ "We have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night" (Tombstone epitaph of two amateur astronomers) |
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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
beautiful |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Short and sweet! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my...so sad, so sad |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, you know, this could have been written about me at one time. |
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