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When ? ... Tell Me When
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When ? ... Tell Me When |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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When? ...Tell Me When ~Marge Tindal~ 1999 When will I stop loving you? When will this aching heart mend? When will I stop remembering the love ... I never thought would end? When will thoughts of you abandon every thought that I maintain? When will I stop loving you ... so I can try to love again? When you left ... you left your memories. They haunt me night and day. Why, oh why did you leave them? For they just get in my way. When will I stop remembering? When will my heart be free of you? When will you take your memories, so I can find another and get over loving you? Locked in every crevice of my heart and my mind ... the memories of you waiting to haunt me one more time. When will I stop loving you? Please release me from this pain. When will I stop loving you ... so I can gain control again. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is heart breaking Marge. Memories do get in the way sometimes. Very well done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You write well and I enjoyed every read so far. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks Martie and Seymour. I'm glad you are finding my poems to your liking. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
A heart that crys out. Your emotions come out well in your writing. I too have enjoyed reading your work. May you get beyond and love again! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done, Martie. A sad one  ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Heartbreaking....Well done. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh how your writing has changed! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, I use to ask myself these questions all the time. This could have been written about me. It sure fits. |
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