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LRAW
Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 15


0 posted 1999-11-06 11:45 PM


Perfect Ash

Perfect Ash, Shining so brightly
Defying what others think of you
When I caress you I feel so free
You are the common man's every need
I get excited when I think of you
Oh Perfect Ash, shine so bright

When my lips bring you in
It's like love fills my lungs
Other don't understand
That I need to be with you
Please oh, please don't burn out
Oh perfect Ash, shine so bright

I can't imagine a world without
your sweet smell that fills the air
You leave no doubt in my mind
That you are essential to mankind

But groups of people try to put you out
They don't know what you mean
But please don't worry, I will not
Let you too far out of my sight
Oh perfect Ash, shine so bright

And now were here face to face
You and me, the way it should be
I am in state of such bliss
I hope it always ends like this
Oh perfect ash, shine so bright
Oh perfect ash, please shine so bright

© Copyright 1999 LRAW - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-06 11:49 PM


Enjoyed the read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-11-07 01:19 AM


Interesting one! Welcome to Passions!
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