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Kevin
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0 posted 1999-11-06 10:44 PM


Look into my eyes of ire
Demons you can’t hope to tame.
Soul and sweat ignite to fire
Fenced in by recondite flame.
Singe your face your fears grow stronger
Mortality and time expire.
Of life and death which one lasts longer?
When your suffering in the fire.
Screams of hellish horror plauge you,
mind and body start to tire.
Remember me and how we came to
this your collapsing in the fire.

© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 1999-11-06 10:47 PM


Wonderful poem, Kevin.....I really like this.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Denise
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2 posted 1999-11-06 10:48 PM


This is very intense, Kevin and very well written. Thanks for sharing this.

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Denise


Kevin
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3 posted 1999-11-07 12:23 PM


as always guys, thanks for the feeback
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