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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Frostbitten Mind Sunlight's melt upon frozen thoughts penetrating flawlessly attempting to thaw this frostbitten mind. Transferred deeply hidden cavernously out of existence little puddles manage their escape. Frostbitten mind remains frozen no thaw in sight icicles crackle is all I imagine. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nicely done.  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very nice, Lost Dreamer! I enjoyed reading this! ------------------ Denise |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Thank-You both for reading, glad you enjoyed. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
I enjoyed this piece much Lost Dreamer.....very well written....... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LD, The icicles will grow This is what I know. Enjoyed the read. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
The warmth in your heart will thaw that mind in time. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Love your choice of words! Sunlight's melt upon frozen thoughts. Well done! |
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