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Blood and Lipstick
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Blood and Lipstick |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
With a soul dripping in envious green Eyes that smolder charcoal black, burning hate Does she have a tender side no one's seen? Are there sunny things to which she'll relate? Her exterior is plastic and cheap Her clothes are designed to gain a few friends She is always dating many a creep For attention, she lies and pretends She'll slice up her wrists and shed a few tears She suffers in a little rich girl's life She's just like her mother, thrives on the fears Of the victim in which she causes strife Her selfish, self-pitying role does the trick She's drowning in blood, buried in lipstick ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
WOAHH... this is saturated in contempt... very powerful... you do a wonderful job at creating pictures!! ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, EXTREMELY powerful, SD...this packs an emotional punch, thats for sure. Exellent work. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done...know the type well! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Wow...powerful pen you've got there SD  Well stated. ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Thanks Star Fairy, Alwye, Watcher, and caroline. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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