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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-11-05 09:18 PM

God condemns man to living death,
divine madness stealing each breath.
Against fate does Heaven conspire,
denying each Hell-born desire.

Upon divine ashes man feeds,
seduced by his exigent needs.
In God one should never place trust,
for soon will life return to dust.

Creation shakes with profound mirth,
denying mankind's sense of worth.
Ambitions are placed out of reach,
as futile action God does teach.

Deity becomes puppeteer,
showing Heaven to be nadir.
Faith supports the morally weak,
against which no one dares to speak.

Heaven's madness steals divine breath,
denying man each Hell-born death.
God condemns each living desire,
so against fate does man conspire.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-05 09:24 PM

Now as always I stand in awe of your talent brother of my soul.Excellent!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 1999-11-05 10:04 PM

That's exactly why we should trust Him, because we shall return to dust, whence we came!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 1999-11-05 10:15 PM

Always enjoy reading your poetry.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

4 posted 1999-11-06 06:59 PM

Just a touch of bitter to leaven the sweet.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

5 posted 1999-11-06 07:08 PM

Even though I don't agree and see life a little different, it's a very good poem and I enjoyed reading it.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

6 posted 1999-11-06 07:10 PM

Even though I don't agree and see life a little different, it's a very good poem and I enjoyed reading it.

Jennifer Marie O'Neil
Junior Member

since 1999-11-01

Posts 48
port charlotte fl/bklyn ny

7 posted 1999-11-07 05:07 PM

I really think this is a great poem. But I think it takes a strong person to have faith, faith brings hope and hope makes people stronger. Still what a great poem !

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