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Tell Me That You Love Me (a Pantoum)
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Tell Me That You Love Me (a Pantoum) |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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Please tell me that you love me. Tell me your intent is true. Is it unconditionally? The way that I love you? Tell me your intent is true. Will it be for always? The way that I love you? Or is it just for today? Will it be for always? Something to believe? Or is it just for today? If you give you will receive. Something to believe? Right there for me to touch. If you give you will receive. Because I love you so much. Right there for me to touch. Is it unconditionally? Because I love you so much. Please tell me that you love me. ------------------ Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exellent job with lovely sentiments!  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful....Well done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
wonderful pantoum Lucie. Well done. |
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