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Martie
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0 posted 1999-11-05 03:48 PM




You bring
your tools
into my secret garden
You name my plants
fondle my soil
soak each delicate root
stroke the black fur
that leaps in leaf chase
across the lawn

deep and deep
in swaying rhythm
you fertilize my flowers
shovel-fulls of love

reach
twirl
bow
graceful garden dance
we

© Copyright 1999 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
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1 posted 1999-11-05 03:52 PM


um...we are talking flowers here right?...thought I was in adult there for a minute. Strong visual.

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.

Watcher666
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2 posted 1999-11-05 08:52 PM


Softly sensual.Enjoyed the read.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-04-25 09:16 PM


sweet!
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