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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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A real heart beats within this breast Real legs get weary and need rest Real feelings suffer angst and pain When your rapier wit lets loose again. It really matters what you do Though all you care about is you You give no damn of how I feel But both I and my love are real! You may not think I see or care Guess lust replaced your brain up there? The tears that redden these blue eyes Come from a soul that really dies. Just laugh as though I am not here You really are a bitch, my dear! |
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Justin Thyme Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 216Oz |
Whoa! Hey, now! What's the problem here? Of course, you're here, my friend. I don't know why you feel like this, but hope this soon will end! You sure sound like you're serious, I truly hope you're not! Why are you calling people names? Those names can hurt a lot! I'm sure whoever hurt you didn't mean to do it!!!!!!!! Sometimes words can be read wrong, I guess this person blew it.  here's hoping your poem was just fiction and all is well with you |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Suthern: Me thinks we should switch mirrors..:-) HUSG my friend ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
suthern my friend...I know that you exist and you are a special woman. I am sorry that this person made you feel this way. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I din't do nuthin? It must be that Balladeer or that other bitch LongJohn?....I do know that after Balladeer posted that poem about huntin a romance on the internet, and then, never did get a response from Pee Wee Herman, (his true love), that some things went kinda crazy around here...but honestly, I've behaved...(some).....LOL....nice poem though bitch! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Whoa Suthern! What's up? You care to expound on this a bit? Someone calling you that or you calling someone else that? Either way it sounds like you could use one BUG HUG!!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A BUG hug, WhtDove???? Call Balladeer! LOL And Toe... I wouldn't want you one bit different from what you are, dear friend... 'cept for that patience thang, you're dern near perfect! LOL. (Well... you did forget the "silly." *G*)... and ROFL @ Pee Wee! *G* Rainbow: I'd rather switch wardrobes... and be able to fit in yours! *G* (Can I have your car, too? *G*... you can keep the worm. *EG*) Marilyn: Thank you!  Justin & WhtDove: You're right... this isn't the norm for me... guess I needed the vent... thanks bunches! [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 11-05-1999).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
ROFLMAO...Suthern I'm sorry, I didn't catch that. I didn't do that on purpose. When I saw that I cracked up really hard. I'm sorry Hon! You can vent anytime you know that. I'm sorry you're feeling like this. Call Balladeer, oh no, better find a place to hide real quick. On the serious side, if you'd like to, give me an email...I'd like to know what you're talking about. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WOW Suthern, this poem really gets the message across. So sorry you feel like this, hopefully soon, it will fade away (((hugs)))------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Suthern: You can help yourself to my wardrobe any time..  As for the car: it's yours but you'll have to pay the import duty, how about we share?.. HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
sending HUGS Suthern..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
(HUGS) from me too, how awful for her to make you feel this way. Hope the venting helped ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ahhhh, Suthern, I hope everything's OK. This feels so sad. ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
So sad And angry!------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I hope you're happy, Toerag! This wonderful woman has idolized you and for you to do this...this...whatever you did...to her is more than I can understand. Or was it LongJohn? I hope you're happy, Longjohn! this woman had idolized you and............ Suthern, I've got a thicknecked friend named Bruno who would love to speak to whoever caused you to write this.... |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
OUCH ! your words make my ears hurt Been there, done that, be alert There are those who you should shun 'Till you find your rightful one ------------------ Sometimes nonsense isn't . |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Another great one Auntie ! SMOOCHES |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Balladeer: I'll admit I've called that sweet Toerag many things (wonderful, incredible, magnificent, fine, kind-hearted, gorgeous, witty, funny, intelligent, lovable... to name just a few *G*) but I've never once been even a little bit tempted to call him a bitch! LOL. (Neither have I been guilty of idolizing Long John... but thanks for the grins! LOL) Thank you all very much for your kind comments and concern... both are appreciated. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
suthern, really great poem, can you teach me to vent like this *g* maybe some down and out anger would do me good *g* ROFG@bug hug, call balladeer, idolizing LJ, thicknecked friend named Bruno.... somehow that doesn't equal out, suthern gets hurt and needs to vent, we get to read her great poem, and then rofg@the responses.....but at least everyone feels better....right? hope so big hugs lady, you are special to me [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 11-08-1999).] |
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Jennifer Marie O'Neil Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 48port charlotte fl/bklyn ny |
so much feeling and such a great poem ------------------ Faith is to believe what we do not see, and the reward of faith is to see what we believe. AUGUSTINE |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
sending more Hugs..... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 11-08-1999).] |
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Lilli Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 21Melbourne, Australia |
Captured the way I feel perfectly, 'cept I think this about a selfish lil' boy! not a bitchy lil' girl *growls* |
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