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Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095


0 posted 1999-11-05 08:34 AM


By The Shore


Standing here by the shore
The warm sun embraces me
These feelings I can't ignore
Oh how I'm missing you lately

The gentle breeze feels so fine
As the ocean sings me her song
Oh how I wish you were mine
Together, I know we do belong

Footprints upon the golden sand
Wishing that they were yours
As you tenderly hold my hand
My heart Skips a beat and soars

Way up high towards the sky
Feeling fine and fancy free
Tears forming ripples as I cry
Cause you can't be here with me


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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01
Posts 265
Australia
1 posted 1999-11-05 08:42 AM


Wow DA - that was beautiful hon. You have a gift.

Huggs,
Moonshine.

suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
2 posted 1999-11-05 09:12 AM


Longing well expressed... I like this one very much.
Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
3 posted 1999-11-05 09:39 AM


Like this much DA....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 1999-11-05 10:40 AM


Spectacular D.A. You described it well!
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-11-05 10:50 AM


Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

6 posted 1999-11-05 04:16 PM


Moonshine, thanks Hon for your lovely comment and compliment. (((HUGS)))
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Suthern, thank you so very much
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Thank you Pepper for your lovely comment
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WhtDve, Angel, thank you so very much (((HUGS)))
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Watcher, thank you

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-04-25 09:18 PM



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