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Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 1999-11-04 10:01 PM


Your verse is so familiar,
Each thought could be my own.
Concern I feel is valid,
Though oceans separate our homes.
I think of you as Sister,
A bond so very dear.
Pain I see within your words,
I quickly run to E-mail.
I hate to see you suffer,
Even the slightest hurt.
So please be sure and
Understand,
My shoulder will never jerk.
Please bend my ear,
Lean on me,
Whenever I am needed.

Someday my friend,
I do intend,
To look you in the eye.
Hug you close and let you know,
Sister's NEVER die.

© Copyright 1999 Marilyn - All Rights Reserved
Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
1 posted 1999-11-05 08:53 AM


Very sweet......

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-05 10:53 AM


This was lovely!! Enjoyed it much!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 1999-11-05 04:50 PM


Pepper and Watcher...thankyou for reading this. My Soul Sister challanged me to write this and I hope I did her justice.
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

4 posted 1999-11-05 05:06 PM


This is a lovley poem Marilyn enjoyed it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 1999-11-05 06:01 PM


You di me justice and then some sis!! Beautiful sentiments, thankyou. I know you will meet me face to face one day, when you are a famous writer and have the money to travel the world. Thanks so much!! (HUGS)

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Marilyn
Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
6 posted 1999-11-05 08:50 PM


I hated to reply to your post Isis....the two poems were sitting right beside eachother...as they should be. You give me much credit with the famous writer remark. I hope it comes true but I just enjoy the writing. I guess we all have dreams as long as we enjoy the doing.
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