The Garden( or, happiness found in dreams)

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Open Poetry #3

The Garden( or, happiness found in dreams)

For_Never
Member

since 1999-10-27

Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America

0 posted 1999-11-03 11:45 PM

In the garden she stood,
flowing with the light breeze.
So accepting of the gentle tugging,
one has to wonder..
who is tugging who..
never does she break
only accepts what she must
to grow,
to be..

She lives..She loves..She is..
What beauty could she not possess?
Swaying gently..dancing upon the breeze
She is all I see in that Garden,
though other are there I am sure..
but for them i care not

No, it is alone that intraps my heart..
I want to drink of the nectar of thoughs lips
and lightly touch that great spirit
to dance but a moment with the song of her soul
and spent but a lifetime within those eyes

I am transfixed inside her..
though far away I am..
and why she chose me,
I know not...
-and how this magick spell was casted upon..
I care not..
I am captured..
and I submit..
I am hers..
in this Garden..

-Edward A. Beerman
8-27-97

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For a fateful night of passion, since my heart need one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent...

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-11-04 12:25 PM

Beautiful

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-11-04 02:32 AM

Lovely!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Pepper
Member Elite

since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

3 posted 1999-11-04 10:04 AM

Enjoyed this much Edward....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

4 posted 1999-11-04 10:16 AM

Nice job Edward.....

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 1999-11-04 01:36 PM

Yes, well done.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 1999-11-05 02:26 PM

I enjoyed!

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

7 posted 1999-11-05 11:10 PM

nice job!

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

8 posted 1999-11-05 11:15 PM

Very very beautiful....this is a truly lovely piece.

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*Krista Knutson*

"To be great is to be misunderstood...." - Ralph Waldo Emerson

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