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Saturday Warm |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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The marshmallows ooze, charred, a white glob turns black, and curls into ash. Sticky fingers are delicious across a smoke of sky. a child smiles and catches the sun tumbling into water the laughter of a splash. The house settles into evening accepting the breeze through the open window. Listen to the crickets the laughter of children and the far off sound of Vivaldi. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
What a beautiful day! Very lovely poem, Martie!  ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Martie, this is absolutely wonderful. The imagery in this was fantastic....I could hear the sounds and see those marshmallows perfectly. Well done Ruth |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nice imagery.Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Delightful piece Martie...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
I like this one. Very pleasant images, nice work. ------------------ Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I enjoyed! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful imagery |
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