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aaron sanchez
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since 1999-11-02
Posts 7
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0 posted 1999-11-03 05:35 PM


I want you.
To say I love you
Is to me unsatisfactory
For I can not begin to reiterate
What I truly feel inside.
All I want is to hold you,
To kiss you with my peasant lips
Upon your regal forehead
And to but carress the strands
Of gold and honey
That pour out from your crown.
To drink the wine
That trickles from your lips
And drives me so far into your soul
And into madness
That I can't contain my love.
I am drawn to you
Like a deer to water,
Like an eagle to the air.
To behold the daisies
That from your feet bloom
Or the dandelions
That from your eyelashes sprout.
Fulfill.
All I can do is attempt
To fulfill you with my love,
A love I've held for so long.
This world is suffocating,
This love is overtaking.
I'm suffocating from this feeling,
This desire, this random nothing
Of pineapple's tart acid
And orange's sweet life blood.
Let me but drink of your happiness,
Of your eyes, lips, and soul,
And hold steadfast what I know to be true.
I love you, I love you.
I can not say it any other way.
I love you.

© Copyright 1999 aaron sanchez - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 1999-11-03 05:48 PM


So beautiful (SIGH) How could she resist?

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Lynn
Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
2 posted 1999-11-03 06:09 PM



I have to agree with Isis. So beautiful, and I know I wouldn't be able to resist. (HUGS)

Iloveit
Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
3 posted 1999-11-03 06:24 PM


no kidding, this is beautiful, wow!
aaron sanchez
New Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 7
N/A
4 posted 1999-11-03 06:28 PM


thanx all. i really appreciate it.
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-11-04 09:46 AM


Beautiful...well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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