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Making Memories |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648
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All the things we do along life's way The big and small things, ev'ry day Both kind and cruel deeds, ev'ry act Make a memory - that's a fact! The caring word and the tender touch Cost not a thing yet mean so much And since we'll sow seeds anyway Let's plant the good ones ev'ry day! The loving smile, the list'ning heart Oh, such a wealth we can impart To all we meet, yes, we can be A sweet refrain - eternally! The deeds we do are forever cast As in stone and shall ever last So as we go along our way Let's sow the good seeds ev'ry day! 12/98 ------------------ Denise |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yes, let's. Beautiful job, Denise. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
May all your memories be pleasant ones from here on out  |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
lovely Denise as well as a great message....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
I agree. Very nice, Denise. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
lovely work, with a very true message..I like it. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Elizabeth, Hoot, Pepper, Sally and Krista! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! ------------------ Denise |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
Enjoyed it....an understatement to say the least! Outstanding! It reads well and has sssssooooooooooo much depth. If we would all read this and try to live our lives with the realization that ALL we do affects others, what a wonderful world this would be. Bravo to you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denice, Well done, Bless you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Pufalove and Seymour, my sincere thanks for reading and commenting! ------------------ Denise |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
I loved this Denise. I always say the good seed we plant become flowers; the bad seeds become weeds, and weeds can not grow where flowers bloom. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Julie, for taking the time to read and comment. I'm glad that you liked it. ------------------ Denise |
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Don Juan de Feu Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 25 |
mais, oui ms.!! c'est bon....tres smoooocheaux DJdeF |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And of course..yanno that's what I always try to do...right?....Well, in "sowing" those seeds, I do tend to use alotta fertilizer however.....This was a great poem, thought provoking, and a great way to map out one's life.....Well done! |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
denise, really nice, just loved the sentiment and the way you came across  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Let's do it ! Make this world a little bit better. : ) I loved it Denise. : ) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Denise a lovley poem and message ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
So beautiful.Loved this! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
DJdeF- merci! Toe- The best flowers grow when liberally fertilized!  lloveit, Munda, Dark Angel and Watcher- Many thanks! ------------------ Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Keep on sowing the seeds of love. What you plant, you will harvest. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks, Martie, I'll try! My heart's aimed in that direction! Thanks so much for reading and commenting! ------------------ Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Sharing the seeds of your poetic sow so that others here will know just how much I do enjoy the poetic blooms of your word garden found in the archived rooms~ ****Playing in the archives ... having a Denise day~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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