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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-11-01 12:56 PM



Poetry is flowing from my fingers today,
Perhaps not all of it good,
But they are certainly banging on out,
I wouldn't stop them if I could!

Words of wisdom too are coming so quickly,
Sound advice and even poetic in deliverance,
Considering my soul just this morn was sickly,
My heart is now overrun with confidence.

A pleasant change I can't help but say,
For the day when it started for me was so dismal,
I'm on top of the world and love everyone in it,
Even those who are misreable.

This renewed confidence is like a drug or some much longed for power,
I can never have enough,
So I will relish it and preserve it,
And remember it again when things get rough.

Which I might add they inevitably do,
But that is ok I can face the realities now,
And once again I'll muddle through,
And find the right road somehow.

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
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1 posted 1999-11-01 02:16 AM


Today is your poetry day! Another great one! 2 thumbs UP again!


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~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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2 posted 1999-11-01 09:04 AM


Isis, I'm glad today you found your voice...or at least your fingers found the words
Patrick B
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uk
3 posted 1999-11-01 11:13 AM


Feel's familiar Isis,well put.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 1999-11-01 03:16 PM


Now if we could only bottle that Rx! Good job!
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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5 posted 1999-11-01 03:46 PM


I agree with Echo......two thumbs up Isis!! you are certainly on a roll...S...Good job!......I'm glad you have your confidence back....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

suthern
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6 posted 1999-11-01 04:09 PM


Well done... and I hope you ride that wave of confidence for a long time! *S*
Isis
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7 posted 1999-11-01 04:56 PM


The poem itself mightn't be that good, but the feeling and the high were Thanks everyone for responding

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

8 posted 1999-11-02 05:01 AM


Enjoyed the read!! Good for you!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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9 posted 1999-11-02 10:45 PM


Thanks again Watcher

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Denise
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10 posted 1999-11-02 10:49 PM


"Don't worry...be happy....*singing to self and bebopping about in my chair*

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Denise


Balladeer
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11 posted 1999-11-02 11:44 PM


Poetic days can do that to us. Glad you're having one!
Isis
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12 posted 1999-11-02 11:53 PM


Thanks Balladeer The holiday recently had probably helped too!

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


For_Never
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America
13 posted 1999-11-02 11:56 PM


Poetry in motion, so liek a drug, ebbing to flow,
so unlike a drug which often constricts, poetic writing is freedom and love in a mix


*laughs at his little rhyme*

EAB

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
14 posted 1999-11-03 12:01 PM


Clever! She LOL herself!! Thanks For Never

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


passing shadows
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displaced
15 posted 2005-04-15 09:08 PM


good one
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