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A Little "Look"...
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A Little "Look"... |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin 
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Goin 'bout your business not a second thought of why just running daily errands lets catch lunch on the fly Then suddenly your standing in pure dumb-foundedness cant remeber what your doing cant quite see what you've missed Soon your eyes are seeing but no-one's home "upstairs" you've just for one split second realized "whats" there And as you start to feel now your stomach's tied in knots breathing quickly, deeply... "feel" in all those "funny" spots Fear is rushing fast now through every little vien but you cant look away yet it hits you like a train Your eyes are locked to thiers still "butterflies" are dancing fast your heart is pounding fiercly for air you start to gasp Then in a flash its over not knowing what to do all from a glowing smile directed right at you Back to your day, but smiling nice thoughts run through your mind cant help but feel special a place inside that "glance" will find  ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Sweet! Loved this one! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Watcher666..... Thank you, greatly appreciated ------------------ Life is what you make of it... Not what you let it be |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Hmmmm... sounds nice to be on the receiving end of one of those looks! *G* |
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Lynn Member
since 1999-09-20
Posts 316Jasper, Alabama U.S.A. |
Wonderful, Marvalous, all around great. Love the poem, and love the feeling. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and where are you lately? |
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