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My Beacon In the Night (a Pantoum)
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My Beacon In the Night (a Pantoum) |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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Did you know you're my everything? The wind that helps me fly. When I can't count on anything. You lift me to the sky. The wind that helps me fly. You help me to continue on. You lift me to the sky. You've made me feel like I belong. You help me to continue on. Although I want to quit. You've made me feel like I belong. A puzzle piece that fit. Although I want to quit. At times you’ve held me while I cried. A puzzle piece that fit. You've touched the little girl inside. At times you’ve held me while I cried. My beacon in the night. You've touched the little girl inside. You are my only light. My beacon in the night. When I can't count on anything. You are my only light. Did you know you're my everything? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Nan wouldn't let me use the excuse that I was tired when I wrote this and she made me edit it..  hehe[This message has been edited by Lucie (edited 11-03-1999).] |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Lucie...I'm happy you've found your guiding light.May it always be so.  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Lucie, this is so beautiful. I am so glad things are going better for you...your writing is an inspiration to all when you have a positive outlook. Michael |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Watcher he was always there, I let my darkness dim my view. But true love always shines through. Michael thank you so much for that comment, I am honored to be titled an inspiration by someone who writes as wonderfully as you do. Keep your chin up. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lucie - You're looking a bit green around the gills - You should maybe be getting more sleep??? |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
So glad he is always there for you ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lucie, I love this! And how did you make that little green face? Soooooo cute! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Lucie, I really enjoyed this one. You did a great jobe with it. Like the message behind it ------------------ Alis volat propriis |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Great job, Lucie! You mean Nan is a meanie, too? Thank God! |
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