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mia
Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118


0 posted 1999-11-02 09:38 PM


Created love
from what you had
out of ashes
you became the sky
that clouded over
the fields of my heart

this summer was
where I fell in love
with the thought
of one day
bearing your child
you, unloved child
wonderful father
to all that will come
from my entrails
breathe me
I will absorbe you
until what you make of me,
november comes
and everything between us
in us...
has built walls
around what should be
and love hides
under the table
clothed with fear
of loosing the most preacious
thought of you
in the moonlight
making love to the night
as it was me
intaking
all that will be
when the walls go down
and we remain
untouched
to our children...
November will pass


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Baby...I know that november will be hard...but I promise that it will pass and our love will survive for all of our children to see.
I simply love you

Mia

© Copyright 1999 mia - All Rights Reserved
Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-02 09:40 PM


Enjoyed the read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-02 11:03 PM


I enjoyed this, the visuals are good
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-04-25 09:52 PM


this is so special
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