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The Jackal
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-10-02 07:02 PM


nights of lonely
days of envy
still you cant
live within me
stranded stranded
hope so low
only pain is ever shown
why oh why
do you angels ,spirits
pass me by
do i deserve to be saved
know love
be above
or is down the way
lost among the sea
where nothing waits for me..


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© Copyright 1999 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
roxane
Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 505
us
1 posted 1999-10-03 12:25 PM


this one was also good. it really touched me, i mean it. all your poetry has been really good and i have enjoyed it.
Saxoness
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Senior Member
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
2 posted 1999-10-03 12:47 PM


yes, you are so very talented......never forget that.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



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