Open Poetry #3 |
It's About Thyme |
Justin Thyme Member
since 1999-09-13
Posts 216Oz |
It's About Thyme Perplexed when mother called me to the door and looked with scowl and doubt at my small hands, then asked if I had washed them, or once more, had failed to use the soap and rinse the sands. When I looked at her and saw her glaring eyes, then back out to the sandbox where toys sank, I quickly, in my little mind summ'ized, that if my hands weren't washed, then I'd get spanked. My dinner had been ready for some Thyme. And Mama had already called me in. And yet I stayed and played as though sublime, and that's when I remember my first sin. I lied, Yes Mama, I have washed my hands. She looked and smiled and I felt I had hope. I was so happy she did understand, and scurried to the sink to find some soap. The kitchen had a smell of apple pie and Mama, she was standing at the sink. And so I ran right upstairs to keep the lie and passing by her, she gave me a wink. So dinner had avoided reprimands 'til Mama gave my Papa a high sign, and Papa asked if I had washed my hands. I nodded, then he shouted, "It's 'bout Thyme!" |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
My hats off to you Mr. Thyme. You just keep 'em comming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very cute! ------------------ Denise |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Very vivid! Nice one. Tyson |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
Awwwww..... I love those memories...and I have quite a few that are VERY similar. Nice work. ------------------ "To waken doubt in one Holding so fast by thine infinity; So surely anchored on The steadfast rock of immortality." ...Emily Bronte, "Last Lines" |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Justin, I have to say you are writing some good stuff here, even though you have me wondering where you got the laptop. You all are gonna have me obsessed in no time at all. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
too cute....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
It's about Thyme. hahaha I thought the poor lad was gonna get it. Cute one! |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Cute! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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