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Sweet Things |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Honey Sticks on me forever Sugar Sweetens bitter things Nectar Drawing all the bees Candy Melting in the sun Syrup I'll guard it from the ants You will never hurt again The sweet things you possess Are safe with me- Under my toungue ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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mia Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118 |
I like this...the way it comes out...simple but oh so "sweet"... mia |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Well done!!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, melts in your mouth.....nice one |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a clever piece |
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