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Open Poetry #3

Finding your rythem

wolfie97
Member

since 1999-10-18

Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

0 posted 1999-11-02 07:27 PM

Every so often I can find a time
Where everything is so silent and
Calm when all that is heard is the
Vibration of my slowly beating Heart. That very beat is heard by Me and myselfe alone. It is not a Symphony of harmony, but a
Single,
Solitary,
Slow,
Steady,
Beat.
This steady pounding
Of this single heart
Is just a symbol of
My solitary life.

Listen to your sound, your rythem
That is unique to you and you Alone.
Just listen to your sound.
Your-
Very-
Own-
Beat-
Beat-
Beat...Beat...Beat...Beat...

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-02 08:01 PM

Liked this much.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-11-02 08:41 PM

Well, this could use some work....the end drags on too much...but I liked the message, so back to the top it goes!

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

3 posted 1999-11-02 08:49 PM

I think it's cute. Don't know what to make of the palpatations on the last line. But as I said.

Cute, love it.

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