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The Jackal
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-11-02 02:24 PM


i was wasted
lost among the snow
and she was something
that still affects me somehow
i enjoy being the plaything..
find this all amusing
want to hear my story..
it plays out all right
pain pain..i could just eat away my brain
for i havent the courage to run away
i had one night
more than i ever could be allowed
now im being constanly swallowed
its so damn fun..its so damn real
please do join me..
tied and thrashed to this wheel
id rather be dead than lonely
so stone me like you want too..
i wont even feel a thing
ive lost that power
ive lost that soul
that helps me stay..
i dont wish to go




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Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

1 posted 1999-11-02 03:16 PM


Enjoyed the read.Nicely done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-02 06:44 PM


Nice read Jackal
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