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I Think He's Gonna Die
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I Think He's Gonna Die |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
I Think He's Gonna Die He was so very faithful, Been so loyal all these years. He's seen a lot of laughter and we shared a lot of tears. He always did my bidding, never questioned my intent. And when I told him where to go, he always gladly went. But now it seems he's taken ill, I sigh and then I moan. I think he's gonna die and I'll be left here all alone. Tomorrow's gonna be another sad day at my house until I go and buy myself another puter mouse! ------------------ I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Cute! Lots of great bargains out there now too!  ------------------ Denise |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
You had me ready to cry....until the end.Cute! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Thanks Denise, . And you can bet I'll be looking for a bargan. This one is just all but gone. Tried to clean him up but to no avail.Thanks, Watcher. It is sad. I was almost in tears over the little rodent while I wrote it.  It gets frustrating.[This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 11-02-1999).] |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
LoL Ohme...like this very much...poor puter mouse Jenny |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
LOL Ohme......very clever expression! May he rest in peace....g...... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
LOL |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
LOL - You know, I wasn't gonna read this at first, I even skipped over it a couple of times because I thought it was gonna be real depressing...and of late, I've had enough of that on my own (sigh) however, I decided to stop and read, and am so glad I did !! LOL What a funny little twist at the end ! I liked this alot - - thanks for the smile ! ------------------ ~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Thanks, Jenny, Pepper, Hoot. I made a deliberate effort to pull a switcheroo on this one. If the chuckle came through the back door, I accomplished my intent. PFF, glad you stopped in for a . Even more pleased that I gave you a when you were not expecting it. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Well you certainly accomplished what you set out to do. I thought it might have been an animal such as a dog or something. Then it turns out as your puter mouse. Very good twist there. LOL |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Fancy a live one? I just rescued one from the cat...LOL...Not sure it would ever stay in one place long enough to be useful though..*g* HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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