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Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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0 posted 1999-11-01 08:14 PM


Needed to remove this at this time.
Sorry.

[This message has been edited by Severn (edited 11-05-1999).]

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Denise
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1 posted 1999-11-01 08:24 PM


Beautiful, Severn and quite poetic!

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Denise


Severn
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2 posted 1999-11-01 09:36 PM


You think so? Cool! Thanks denise.
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
3 posted 1999-11-01 09:41 PM


Her throbs for Christopher. I love it Severn, great one, no ryhme needed.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
4 posted 1999-11-01 09:43 PM


Severn...this is wonderful. It flows so smoothly like a gentle stream to the very end. I think it's great. Now take your bow
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
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5 posted 1999-11-01 09:44 PM


One of the most beautiful poems I have ever seen.Very well done!!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
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That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
6 posted 1999-11-01 09:44 PM


AWWWW!!!!

How lovely.....so heartwarming!

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Denise
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7 posted 1999-11-01 09:46 PM


Yep, yep, yep!

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Denise


Thunder Moomba
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since 1999-10-30
Posts 21
Baldwin Park, CA, USA
8 posted 1999-11-01 09:50 PM


This is a pretty great poem Severn

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"The stars my shine to night, But will they shine tomarrow?"
-Jr. Rodrigo M. Daz_


Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
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Texas
9 posted 1999-11-01 10:20 PM


Beautiful.
Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
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Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
10 posted 1999-11-01 10:50 PM




LOVELY!!!! & BEAUTIFUL!!!!

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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
11 posted 1999-11-01 11:00 PM


So very beautiful Severn.....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

Julie
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since 1999-08-20
Posts 739
Houston, TX
12 posted 1999-11-02 12:29 PM


Definately a song of the soul. Purely poetic.

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Julie
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Shoot for the moon. Even if you miss it, you will land among the stars.~Les Brown~

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
13 posted 1999-11-02 01:02 AM


You spoke volumes, don't need rhyme or reason, the love you have and you portrayed is enough

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



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