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Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
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glen easton, wv usa

0 posted 1999-10-31 09:47 PM


My first halloween was just so great, I was
2, and it was 1968.

Scarey things that go bump in the night, the security of mom, was always within sight.

She dressed me as Pocohontas, no kidding folks, like a girl, yuk to be honest.

There I was making my way down the street.

That damb bag getting under my tiny feet.

Having to go door to door, and trying to
mutter a weary, trick or treat.

By the end of the second block I was
thinking, give me a break.

Was thinking about telling my mom, and older
brother, to go jump in a lake.

We made our way safely home.

No more were we to roam.

I soon found halloween was indeed so sweet.

No trick, and all treat.


(CANDY) (CANDY) (CANDY) (CANDY)!!!!!

© Copyright 1999 Richard 33 - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-10-31 09:58 PM


Cute!

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Denise


Richard 33
Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa
2 posted 1999-11-01 01:08 AM


Thanx d actually this was basically a true
story set to a poetic platform, with some
imagineative creativity,wwwwwweeeeellllllll
I might have exaggerated a wee bit (HA)(HA).

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-11-01 01:17 AM


I agree too cute!! We don't celebrate Halloween in Australia, wish my four year old could experience it though.

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-11-02 05:54 AM


Liked this...cute!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa
5 posted 1999-11-02 12:18 PM


Thanks to you all, I thought you would like it.
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