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Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

0 posted 1999-09-30 05:11 PM

when you hurt

when you hurt, I hurt,
can I help my love?

can I look in your eyes
and send you my strength?

can I hold your hand
and let my energy seep in?

can I just be quietly by your side,
no words necessary?

can we talk a million words,
until we have talked you better?

can I hold you in my arms,
kiss your sweet lips
and send you to bliss?

you give so much to me,
what can I give to you?

when you hurt, I hurt,
can I help my love?

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©1999 Iloveit

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

1 posted 1999-09-30 05:31 PM

Iloveit: *sigh*

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 1999-09-30 05:32 PM

Elequaintly written. I agree from the depth of my soul. This is how I feel when someone dear to me hurts. Thankyou for this wonderful piece.

suicidal dreams
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since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

3 posted 1999-09-30 05:39 PM

hmm this is how i feel when i look at the girl im in love with. Seeing her happy makes me happy, and seeing her upset makes me upset.

Very good poem to i really enjoyed reading it.

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life is short kill quick

Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

4 posted 1999-09-30 05:56 PM

yep RG, I know, we are much alike

and hugs back

and Marilyn and Suicidal Dreams, thanks glad you liked it....

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and just a note today is my friday, so if you post on this...and not presuming any will lol...but if, I don't want any to think I disappeared but...I won't be back til monday, so you have my thanks

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Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

5 posted 1999-09-30 06:37 PM

yes, it is a helpless feeling to see someone you care hurting. Sometimes just being there is enough to matter

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

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6 posted 1999-09-30 09:22 PM

Very lovely!

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Denise

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

7 posted 1999-09-30 10:05 PM

Don't ya wish you could help them by touching and letting it flow in? By looking into their eyes and give them the strength they need? Wonderfully written, really nice thought. Balladeer's right there. Sometimes all it takes is just being there.

JTF
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since 1999-08-09

Posts 319
France

8 posted 1999-10-01 03:34 AM

Lovely HFG ... Enjoy your 3 days weekend ! ...

Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

9 posted 1999-10-01 03:44 AM

So sweet....well done.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 1999-10-01 11:48 AM

Beautiful, Lovey... How much we wish our love could heal... how helpless we feel having nothing else to offer! Great job, O&O!

Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

11 posted 1999-10-01 01:12 PM

Sometimes you need that special someone to be there even just to sit and hold you for a while. I know exactly what you mean.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

12 posted 1999-10-01 02:02 PM

It's so hard to see a loved one in pain. You capture this well. Very sweet, well done.

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Michael Anderson

I could not love except where Death
Was mingling his with Beauty's breath -
Or Hymen, Time, and Destiny
Were stalking between her and me.
EAP

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

13 posted 1999-10-01 02:14 PM

My dear one and only...when ya hurt down there....Let Toerag know.....cuz I'll kiss it where....well...you know....and you'll hurt no more.....I give ya my word....or at least you won't care.....that's for sure....

LngJhnAg
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since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

14 posted 1999-10-01 03:02 PM

yeah, and Lovey? If you hurt down there, it won't be because of anything old Toe could have done (i.e., => ). Actually, when I hurt I hate it when somebody tries to get me to talk... just being a man... that's all I wanna do.

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

15 posted 1999-10-01 03:36 PM

oh my.....lovely thinking Iloveit......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Saxoness

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since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

16 posted 1999-10-01 04:13 PM

made me cry, very lovely. very.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

17 posted 1999-10-01 05:40 PM

I can truly relate

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

18 posted 1999-10-01 07:37 PM

this is beautiful,we do feel helpless when someone is hurting.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Iloveit
Senior Member

since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

19 posted 1999-10-04 09:38 AM

thanks all, this poem brought back sad memories to me all weekend, so to come back this morning and see how it touched all of you means much to me, thank you

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