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Open Poetry #3

What i deserve...

The Jackal
Member

since 1999-08-13

Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 1999-10-31 10:14 PM

we all get exactly what we deserve
dont confuse your emotions
for words
as i alienate the people that care
i find no love
from what lies out there
and i cant appologize enough
the best freinds i ever had
told me to be happy
to try to be glad
that im living
that all this can be so good
i was blind
it took a wild night
losing myself in a bottle
to understand what ive lost..
what id only give for another chance
but its too late..
never trust something as foolish
as fate
for you make your own..
i blew it all away..now alone
is my night
is my day..

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Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-31 10:32 PM

Unfortunately, some lessons are hard learned.
You have expressed this very well.

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-11-01 10:20 AM

Nice wording on this one

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

3 posted 1999-11-01 02:39 PM

good job, loved the fate line!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-11-02 05:07 AM

Nicely done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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