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I'm just dealing with the pain
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I'm just dealing with the pain |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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I'm left all alone today, You are back at work, Feeling crushed and alone, Feeling like a jerk. You are over the blow up, All is fine for you, But with me it runs deeper, There's hurting through and through. It's the last thing I thought of, Before I went to bed, This morning it's the first thing on my mind, So many things left unsaid. How can you doubt I love you, After all we have been through? But there is pain on both sides honey, What are we to do? I'll tell you what to do, Edit thoughts and feelings, Edit those painful attacks, They might make you feel better, to me they just send me reeling. So please my love, the only way this will work, Is to push aside the negatives, ANd make the most of all we do have, And fill our lives with the postivies. I'm dealing with this the best that I can, So sick of hurt, pain and grief, I always feel so alone, It's a darkness beyond belief. ------------------ Cast your eyes on the ocean, Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well written, Isis. Once again, hope things are better soon.  ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sad, sad, sad my friend! Hope things will get better soon. Sounds like the two of you need to sit down and have a heartfelt chat with eachother. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks again Denise And WhtDove as you know we did have the talk, but I feel fragile and shattered for a day or two afterwards. Thanks ------------------ Cast your eyes on the ocean, Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Hang in there Isis, Nice poem. ------------------ I look forward to tomorrow, while looking back on the past. But today is the day I am living. And I expect it to be a great day! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I'm hanging on fine, thanks Ohme ------------------ Cast your eyes on the ocean, Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hang in there girl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I have and will continue to do so thanks Hoot ------------------ Cast your eyes on the ocean, Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hugs Isis. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
*Hugs* ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
(HUGS) right back at you Severn and Watcher ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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