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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 1999-10-31 06:27 PM



We are both still hurting,
That's so plain to see,
But you are not alone in grief,
I gave birth to this feeling you see.

I'm doing all the right things,
Not throwing the past in your face,
Yet you only think of yourself,
And that my love is without grace.

We've had a rough road to travel,
Many bumps and bogs along the way,
But I ask God for a helping hand,
For patience and understanding to get me through the day.

I never raise my voice to you,
Or pick at faults and pain,
And when I do finally retailate,
There is nothing that I gain.

We both have to understand,
And push those niggles aside,
Glorify in love, good times and happiness,
And eventually it'll become part of our stride.

I know we can do this,
If you just think of three instead of one,
And our lives will be happy again,
And not continue to come undone.

So I am asking this of you,
Please try for all of us,
So once again our souls can sing,
And not be covered in dust.

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



© Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-10-31 09:18 PM


Wow...you are on a roll today
Thunder Moomba
Junior Member
since 1999-10-30
Posts 21
Baldwin Park, CA, USA
2 posted 1999-11-01 12:01 PM


Cool I like your poem Ms. Isis


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"Happy Halloween Every One"
~Jr. Rodrigo M. {just call me KOddy -code-E-, Jose, Jr., Dr. Daz}
{im not Spanish even if my name has Rodrigo or Jose}

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 1999-11-01 12:19 PM


Thanks Hoot
Thanks TM too

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-11-02 03:25 PM


How much better it would be if we all just tried! Good read!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

RainbowGirl
Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
5 posted 1999-11-02 03:39 PM


Isis: I wish you luck..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 1999-11-02 10:40 PM


Thanks Watcher and RG

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
7 posted 1999-11-03 03:08 PM


I hope your soul sings loud and strong again soon Lisa......poigniant piece!!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire!

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 1999-11-03 06:09 PM


Thanks Pepper, it is so nice to be understood by some at least

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Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


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